Theme park writing

Theme park

One day at John house’s Kishan and John decide to go to a theme park three were lots of ride to go on. So we work for days  and now have the money. We have just  enough money to go to the theme park .

John and I decided to by bus but the bus was broken so we went by car. There were a lot of traffic so we near the theme park .We decided to go on the ferris wheel but just went John was at the top  it stopped.

John said why did it stop because the wires are cut . The ferris wheel carpet and John escape but he was panting. We got the money back but we never ever will go to a theme park.