Creative Writing

This is a oak tree in the spring there is a bright light coming in so keep chill with the air

Under the oak tree,kicked back by the beach from a view,chill going down your spine, the bright sun light on you. The sun shines on my feet sizzlits like a big BBQ  

Today in class we have been doing creative writing. We had to write a sentence about this picture. As a class we chose the sentence we liked to best and then added to it. Here is my sentence and the sentence I added to.