This is my writing from yesterday we had to write about our cross country but this year I did not come to this cross country because I had to do some family things so I am sorry I did not come to cross country here you go
As I gasp for air my lungs started to burn but there was no time to spare I was pushing myself to my limit. Then I see the black and white flag waving at me I could feel relief as I run past my friends. 
You certainly captured the experience well from a previous year I'm assuming Kishan - well done! I love the first sentence it really shows with your words that feeling.
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